Apr 14, 2013

ONE A DAY #13

The Poem a Day Challenge invites poets to produce a new work every day during April, so this is an offering for Day 13, which teams up with Tess Kincaid's Mag 164. 

Will Love Find a Way?







"It's great overlooking the town!
 But say, dearest, why do you frown?"
 She replies, "Well, I fear
 now that we're up here
 I cannot see how we get down."









Spring, 1935 by Kuzma Petrov-Vodin 

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18 comments:

  1. Succinct, if a trifle worrying! I think I have vertigo in sympathy...

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    1. I never thought of that! And Miladdo in the yellow vest doesn't look like he's up to thinking of it either.

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  3. I think a landslide might occur any minute and solve their problem, judging by the edge of that plateau! Worrying, as Trellissimo already pointed out...

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  4. Nice rhyme! and yes she could shove him overboard as you suggest- but I fear she might end up against murder!

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  5. And why would they want to get down?

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    1. Well . . she might want to buy a hat that doesn't clash with her dress quite so violently.

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  6. A fun take on the prompt! Reminds me of enjoying the ski lift ride up and then realizing now I have to make my way down!

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  7. Very cute I am so scared of heights there has been times I managed to go up but down was much much worse!

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  9. Blogger is determined to put my new comment in the wrong place - I give up!

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  10. heh heh heh.......a running jump might be worth a try.....?

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  11. Sometimes being on top of the world isn't all it's cracked up to be!

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