Jan 17, 2011

Microfiction Monday January 17th.

The prompt from Stony River this week offers terrifying possibilities -



"Share parachute, you fat freak! My turn to skydive!"

"Freak yourself! Is parasail not parachute!  For honorable Japanese gents going UP!"

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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    LOL Funny. Made me laugh. I wouldn't have thought of this take on the pic.

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  2. moondustwriterJanuary 17, 2011 at 8:06 PM

    I love it!!! The dialogue is classic

    thanks for stopping in yesterday for Magpie :)

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  3. Fay CampbellJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:51 PM

    Very clever, honorable writer!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 at 3:19 AM

    FUNNY! Best one yet! :)

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  5. jabblogJanuary 18, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    Children, children, take turns!This is such an imaginative response to the prompt - smiling here :-)

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    hahahahaha!

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  7. NessaJanuary 18, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    I love the accents.

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  8. Grandma's GoulashJanuary 18, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    Don't see anything to get that parasail going up. Maybe the fat guy could provide the steam. Great exercise. :)

    Good slant on this one.

    My MF: Details

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  9. TrellissimoJanuary 18, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Velly Good, DoctorFTSE San

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  10. MargaretJanuary 18, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    Gonna need a miracle for that parasail to do the job! Very funny.

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  11. kaykualaJanuary 19, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    A very witty one, against the expected norm...going Up instead of down!

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  12. DeborahJanuary 19, 2011 at 7:24 AM

    These two guys are on my teapot! I shall never be able to take it out of the cupboard again without thinking of you.
    Thank you for my first guffaw of the day, Dr. Dr. !

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2011 at 6:23 AM

    Tee hee, just what the doctor ordered.

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