Jan 10, 2011

Microfiction Monday #65

Writers have no more than 140 characters including spaces, to respond to this picture prompt from the always inventive Stony River.


"Please! I implore you! Put your yellow raincoat back on. It's going to pour with rain. You'll go all rusty, and then I won't love you anymore."


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16 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    Awh, poor mothman, love can be so fickle LOL! :O)

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  2. izzyJanuary 10, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    Oh yes excellent take and a very good point!
    Thanks-

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  3. hopeJanuary 10, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    Such a considerate soul...considering the taste in monsters. :)

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  4. PeggyJanuary 10, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    Rusty would be a turn off for me too.
    Loved your take!

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  5. UnknownJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    If she should leave just because of a little rust, maybe she's not the one for him after all.

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  6. MariaJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    There's nothing like the direct approach I always think!

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  7. jabblogJanuary 10, 2011 at 5:07 PM

    Oh, so fickle!

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    Hm, I think he's going to drop her! :)

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  9. Sylvia KJanuary 10, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    Rusty men always turned me off, too!! Great, fun take on the pic of the day! Have a wonderful week!

    Sylvia

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    Guess Mothman will pay for his vanity! Serves him right, I say...hopefully someone will have an oil can nearby when he needs it!
    Have a great week. Cheers.

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    Ah men - rarely consider the consequences of not wearing protection ...

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  12. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}January 10, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    Doesn't Mothman realise that he might also catch cold if he doesn't put on his Mac. Though it could mean something else.

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  13. Fay CampbellJanuary 10, 2011 at 10:50 PM

    sharp eye and great interp1

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  14. kaykualaJanuary 11, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    Timely warning! An exit strategy in a way!

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  15. YarnladyJanuary 11, 2011 at 6:57 PM

    Glad to know what that yellow thing-y in the back is!
    $20.50 is in the mail!

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  16. PatJanuary 16, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    Then it must not be true love..."in sickness and in health, in steel and in rust..."

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