Dani asks us to write a poem celebrating our senses, or senses as yet undiscovered . .
The 1011000111011011th. Sense
There was a young blogger called Chet
whose navel could download the Net.
But a hacker called Cyrus
emailed him a virus.
Now ring-tones are all he can get.
I think you mean "There" (first word)...
ReplyDeleteI don't get these navel rings... the sense I get is all queasy... I guess I'm just showing my age!
Ouch .. ouch. I've never understood the lure of the navel ring ... the lure of your poetry is something else!
ReplyDeleteBut can he make calls? I do love your sense of humor!
ReplyDeleteA painful sense for sure...:-)
ReplyDeletethat doesn't seem like fun after all ~ oh well ~
ReplyDeleteRing tones for his push button phone, no doubt? LOL But can't help thinking he displayed little sense, of whichever number, in having such a piercing?! Hehehe!
ReplyDeleteMargaret, thank you. I have made the adjustment.
ReplyDeleteAll kind commentators . . . ring me anytime!
Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI quite like these rings (on the very young and very slim only. They didn't have them in my time...)
haha... love this... you and I were on the same wavelength, but I like yours better = )...your limerick is perfect here.
ReplyDeleteThis one rings my bell.
ReplyDeleteOh the irony...this was short, sweet, and damn funny! thank you for this.
ReplyDeletehttp://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/bound.html
Oh, Doctor! I dearly love limericks and hardly anyone writes them! Totally top-drawer, Doc.
ReplyDeleteFunny, but I want to know does anyone answer the ringtone?
ReplyDeletelove this one,
ReplyDeletesmart humor.
{giggle}
ReplyDeletethanks for jamming! at Poetry Jam!
dani ♥
yikes....a virus in the belly button might not be a good thing...lol...we come up with some crazy stuff eh?
ReplyDeletehahahaha brilliant! You're deadly :D
ReplyDeleteDoc, I laughed all the way through the next three posts and would comment on all except I am tucked away on an almost cyber free zone and every download takes all afternoon, so this is getting very silly, but don't stop!
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