G-Man wants 55 words of Friday Flash Fiction and this week "flash" seems kinda well suited. So here's a 55 word action packed drama . . .
Dramatis Personae:
Sticky Vicky (SV)
Big Boy (BB)
Scene: Outdoors, mid-west
SV: Over here, Big Boy. Do something for me.
BB: (Addressing audience) I'm gonna score with Sticky Vicky!
SV: Want to do me a favour?
BB: (Approaching, unzipping) This is it!
SV: Gonna let me flick ash into the turnups of those dumb jeans?
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Haha I like your mini play. I love how they both have books in hand. Nowadays it'd be a phone. I just read a Cormac McCarthy book where the guy did exactly that with his ash, in his own rolled up jeans.
ReplyDeleteWell Doc...
ReplyDeleteI'm glad we finally 'got a rise' outta you!
You still have it eh?
Loved your 55 rewrite.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
A teenage boy's hopes and dreams dashed yet again. ...
ReplyDeleteI am starting to like Sticky Vicki's style
ReplyDeleteYup, that's how we handle dumb boys in the Midwest! lol
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