Tess gives us this evocative picture "The Poet's Sleep" for the prompt for this week's Mag 208.
Poet's Sleep, 1989, by Chang Houg Ahn
Naw, naw.
"I wondered, solitary as a floating cloud . . . "
Aw Gawd . . .
"I skirted the lake, hiked o'er the hills . . ."
Why didn't I stick to burger-flipping?
"I saw large groups of . . whassnames, those yellow ones. Petunias?"
(A door opens.)
"William? Are you in there? I thought maybe you were lying on your couch in vacant or in pensive mood and something flashed upon your inward eye which is the bliss of solitude, and then your heart with pleasure filled, went dancing with the . . ."
"DAFFODILS? DAFFODILS!! That's it, Dorothy! Thank'ee, thank'ee! Just when I was on the point of saying 'Oh, stuff this honing my craft for a game of soldiers.' "
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Honed to perfection, as always, Doc.
ReplyDeleteDaddodils is a welcome conclusion to the sanctity of solitude adorementioned, cheers FTSE ..l.l.
ReplyDeleteLike the form, the dialog, all sounds like thru the fog of sleep...
ReplyDeletehah! Perfecto!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteLove Dorothy's run together, breathless (I am imagining) words ... Yep.
ReplyDeleteThis makes me think I should take more naps!
ReplyDeleteBravo, you tell it like I feel.
ReplyDeleteBrava to Dorothy for timely intervention!
ReplyDeleteZinnias...
ReplyDeleteheh heh heh........rib tickler!!
ReplyDeleteI'm still laughing................
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