Mar 9, 2014
Well and Truly Trashed
A drug crazed rock drummer called Pete
once rented a posh hotel suite,
but he chose to ignore
a sign on the door -
"Please leave the room neat and tidy"
Lee Plaza Hotel, Detroit, photo by Bonnie Beechler
Fellow Bloggers are invited to improve the last line. I gave up after a long struggle.
And once again, best thanks to Tess for the pitch-perfect picture.
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Funny :)
ReplyDeleteYair... I can see how you struggled with the last line. Haha!
ReplyDeleteWho could you possibly be writing about? ;-)
ReplyDeleteGood one Doc
ReplyDeleteLeave the line as is and say, It's avant-garde!
ReplyDeleteNow why didn't I think of that?
Delete"and face planted into the street "
ReplyDeleteYou're excused ... even poor John Travolta can't seem to get things right :-)
ReplyDeleteThat is an awesome take! And thanks for some Rock N Roll history thrown in!
ReplyDeleteOops, hope they don't have his credit card number!
ReplyDeleteA drug crazed rock drummer called Pete
ReplyDeleteonce rented a posh hotel suite,
but he chose to ignore
a sign on the door -
“This room reserved solely for Keith”.
Ha Ha!
ReplyDeleteYour last line made me laugh...
ReplyDeleteI quite like it in it's present 'state'!
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